Wanted By Many

Hey peoples I have this new poem I wrote and I was hoping I could Get some feedback.

Wanted By Many
Wanted by many
taken by none
looking at some
waiting for one
dudes perpetrate all the time
spit all in my ear
tryna climb
the ladder to mi heart
tryna get all up in here
but i keep mi guard up
cause i never really can trust dudes
cause most of 'em lames the others is lust dudes
I don't know why I settle
settle for less
why am I always going thru this mess?
why can't I choose what's best?
for me
who I am
who I wanna be
taking all of my energy
killing me,
inside,
sometimes I wanna cry
I don't even know why I'm still alive
dealing with this pain
tryna get thru this rain
making me insane
sometimes I want it to go all down the drain
why
why does my life have to be so indecifable
why am I going thru this?
this is just high school
but when I think about it all
I take a deep breath
and stand tall
think bout how far I've come
searching
looking for the one
wanted by many
taken by none
looking at some
waiting for one

Chris Brown & Rihanna [Who's Right, Who's Wrong, & Who Deserves What?]

Ever since February I think 9th, when that whole situation kicked off with them people have been slamming on Chris Brown just looking at how he kick her ass. Don't get me wrong he was dead wrong for beating her that bad BUT, it was reported that she slapped him first n that it wasn't the first time. She knows he has anger problems n he know she got 'em too plus he defully knows he should neva hit a female but they both got into an argument before and she slapped him n he shoved her but he didn't hit her. It's not fair to just slam him and not call her on hers. She may not have whipped his ass like he did her but still she shouldn't have hit him. My thing is tha first hit is a freebie hit me again n I'll beat ya down. But personally I think both is dead wrong and that they should each chill out. But really what is tha point of putting this couple on blast for? Bobby n Whitney been kickin each other's behinds for Goodness knows how long. U got R. Kelly having sex with lil gurls n he still making records like come tha heck on. Ike n Tina other examples, I'm not sayin it's right but people weren't as hype bout them as they are wit Chris B n Ree Ree, it's not that deep, it's serious but it ain't dat deep 4 people to be so hype over. It's them so let them deal wit it. Although I still support Chris B 100%. Keep ya head up Chris.